TASK 1
You are required to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:
I will never forget what happened that day when .............................
Reminder:
1. Write in minimum 3 paragraphs
2. Write using Past Tense
3. Not less than 120 words
4. Write your name at the end of your writing
I will never forget what happened that day when .............................
Reminder:
1. Write in minimum 3 paragraphs
2. Write using Past Tense
3. Not less than 120 words
4. Write your name at the end of your writing
I will never forget what happened that day when I was 6 years old. It's been 10 years now but i still remember the moment that happened to me as if it was just yesterday. I just laughed to myself.
ReplyDelete10 years ago,my family and I went to Zoo Melaka. My brothers and I were so happy as a lark because that were our first time went to the zoo. We were really enjoyed that moment.
There were many types of animals such as lions,monkeys,tigers and others. I were so excited to see all of the animals. Then, we went to the snakes section first. I really scared of snakes but my father still forced me to touch the snake and of course I refused it.
Out of the blue, my brother came from my back and gave the snake to me. I were very shocked and cried loudly. After that, my brother told me that it was just a toy. I felt so shamed because I thought it was a real snake. Then,we continued our journey and that day it was a day for me to remember forever.
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Name : DINA NURNAJLAH
DZULKARNAIN
Class : 402
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ReplyDeleteI will never forget what happened that day when my house's electricity got cut. It all started when my parents were working off station,and I was left home with my brother. That night,my brother was downstairs,watching the television while I was upstairs in my room,playing video games. Soon,it started to rain. Not long after that,thunderstorms can be seen everywhere. My brother and I didn't care because it's normal to rain frequently here in Taiping. We continued our activity without being interrupted.
ReplyDeleteOut of the blue,a loud bang of thunderstorm crashed and nearly destroy my hearings. It was a very abnormal thunder,very noisy,and it cut my house's electricity in a blink of an eye. I can't see anything. It's pitch black all around. I quickly turned on my phone's torchlight and walked downstairs slowly. I called my brother,but what scared the freak out of me was,he didn't answer! I kept calling his name until I reached the television, but not even his track can be seen. I had goosebumps and it froze me for a while. I shouted his name,and I still got no response. Luckily,I know how to turn on the electricity back,thanks to my father. I went to the main switch,and I almost popped my eyes out when I saw the switch was turned on! This means that the whole residence area was blacked out! I had no choice but to sleep without the fan. But that didn't worry me as much as I worry about my brother.
I went all around the house to search for him,but he's nowhere to be seen. While I was walking upstairs to search for him there,I was surprised to see him sleeping in my room. He slept like a log,seemed like he'd been very tired,but he hadn't done anything the whole day except watching the television! I woke him up and told him that the electricity went out,and asked him,"weren't you downstairs, watching television? How come you're here,all of a sudden?". He answered," I had been sleeping here since 7 o' clock. Since when was I watching the television? ". As far as I remember,I went downstairs to look for food before playing my video game,and I saw him watching the television since 7.30 pm. If he's here,then who did I saw? Or am I seeing things,since I was miserable and frustrated due to losing too much playing the video game?
Raja Abdul Haadi
402
Lots of words
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I will never forget what happened that day when the fire bursted out. I woke up in the middle of the night hearing some distant shouts. Everything was foggy and all i could see was red. Then i heard someone shouting my name and were asking me to get out. I was beyond confused and thought, Why should i get out? This is my house. Then it dawned upon me that my house was on fire. I started to hyperventilate and panic was written all over my face. Then, a firefighter bursted my bedroom door and everything went black.
ReplyDeleteI woke up with cold sweats all over my body and the room i was in was white. The walls, the floor, the ceiling. Everything was white. I took some time to take in my surrounding and i realised i was at the hospital. Then i remembered about the fire and started to sob loudly which alarmed the nurse who was taking care of me. I asked her, “Where is my mom and dad? Where is my siblings? What happened to them?”. She did not answer and instead, she just hugged me tightly trying to calm me down and only let go when my breathing were stabilize and i'm a bit calm. She called for the doctor to check on me and i asked the same question to the doctor and he replied “I'm really sorry Ella. They didn't survive the fire. The firefighters could only save you."
What? This was a joke right? This was a prank my brother pulled on me right? My thoughts ran wild. Realisation hit me when the doctor could only look at me with pity. My eyes prickled with the hot tears that was streaming down my face uncontrolably. I had not even realised that i had started to cry. My breathing became shallow as i started to wail loudly pitying everyone in the room.
After everything that happened, i lived with my grandparents. They were lovely and they treated me with love and care. But i could not find myself to be as happy as i was before. I pretended to be okay and faked a smile in front of people. But deep down, i know that the bubbly girl that is surrounded with positivity is no longer alive.
izrina farihanis binti ishak
402
I will never forget what happend that day when I went to the backyard and wanted to find a hoe. While looking for it,I look around the backyard and saw something that move to me,I thought it's just a dried leaves that moves by the wind.
ReplyDeleteAfter a while,that things moves and I heard 'sssssss' that really scared me and my mind said that is really a snake.I was super shocked and I ran as fast as a flash into my house and told everyone about it.I also explained them the color of the snake and how it moves.
After that,my father go check it out,and it's real! The color of the snake is brownish black.It was really scary.I called the APM as soon as possible to take the snake and put it at the zoo.The stuff of APM take the snake using their tools.
After an hour,they successfully take the snake and we thanks to them because the service is really good,they came 10 minutes right after we called them.My backyard is free from snake now.We were happy that our backyard has no more snake.
Aida Imanina bt Mohd Syahrulnizam
402
I will never forget what happened that day when I went to Korea with my sister. I was 15 years old back then. I felt very excited knowing that I've finally reached the Seoul city. I was bouncing off the walls because Korea is one of the countries that ensure their cleanliness. The city was extremely fascinating.
ReplyDeleteI felt so tired as I walked around with full of excitement. Then, I decided to go to where I stayed, which was in Holiday Inn Express Seoul Hongdae Hotel. Tomorrow morning, I only ate sandwiches for my breakfast while my sister ate ummappang, halal bread in Korea. After that, we headed to Buckhon Hanok Village, the place where we can discover a lot about their traditional culture and architecture.
We took a lot of pictures there. Suddenly, when we walked all over the Buckhon Hanok Village, I saw the two girls that seems familiar to me. I did a double take when I saw my friends, Nurnajlah and Nurain were happily taking pictures together. Their jaw drops when I shouted their names out of the blue. I have no idea how happy we were when we met each other. What shocked me the most was the fact that they both were actually staying in the same hotel as mine. We decided to just went to next stop together.
By the time when we were walking together, everything started to destroyed slowly. The places, and even all of the people that are with me started to dissapear. All of a sudden, i felt myself fell down from a high place. Apparently, I fell down from my bed and all of it was just a dream. I woke up with full of dissapointment. I hope that my dream comes true in the future.
Akma Qisteena binti Ayob
402.
I will never forget what happened that day when Aunty Jamilah has left us.Aunty Jamilah was a beautiful, kind hearted person that I have ever known.Aunty Jamilah always helped us everytime when we need help with sincere.There's a lot of memories that i will never forget throughout my life. Time passed very quickly,and her lost was definitely not easy for us and also people who know her.
ReplyDeleteWe make plans for the day, and do not think twice about how those plans can be taken away in the blinked of an eye. I never thought much about it myself, until I was faced with the shocked, and undeniable truth of my aunty’s death.
The caused of the death is breast cancer which she had it for almost 4 years but still she was a strong women. The day she dies a piece of me will die too. I learn this is a piece that you cannot fill. It is a piece that cannot be replaced by anything, ever. Day by day, day by day, the longing increases but our prayers will always be with you.
Nurain Insyirah Bt Jamaluddin
402
I will never forget what happened that day when Aunty Jamilah has left us.Aunty Jamilah was a beautiful, kind hearted person that I have ever known.Aunty Jamilah always helped us everytime when we need help with sincere.There's a lot of memories that i will never forget throughout my life. Time passed very quickly,and her lost was definitely not easy for us and also people who know her.
ReplyDeleteWe make plans for the day, and do not think twice about how those plans can be taken away in the blinked of an eye. I never thought much about it myself, until I was faced with the shocked, and undeniable truth of my aunty’s death.
The caused of the death is breast cancer which she had it for almost 4 years but still she was a strong women. The day she dies a piece of me will die too. I learn this is a piece that you cannot fill. It is a piece that cannot be replaced by anything, ever. Day by day, day by day, the longing increases but our prayers will always be with you
NURAIN INSYIRAH BT JAMALUDDIN
402
I will never forget what happened that day when my mom suddenly woke me up from my sleep. I was really clueless and sleepy. My mom told me that my father has involved in a car accident. My mom was crying and told me to changed my clothes. Later that, we hurried up to the hospital.
ReplyDeleteI was really scared and overthinking. I am afraid if i cannot meet my father again. Is he alright? My mind was full of negative thoughts. As we arrived at hospital, we quickly went to emergency department. I saw my father was lying on a hospital bed and was talking to a man who was wearing a police uniform. As soon as i saw my father, I was running towards him and hugged him tightly. My father calmed me and told he was fine.
The doctor told us that my father was alright and he has a small injury on his legs. I was really relieved and grateful to the god. I hope that my father will be more careful in the future.
Nur Rania binti Rosli
402
I will never forget what happened that day when I was first day at school, It was a bad tragedy that happen to me. Beford I going to school I was having a breakfast with my family at the dining area we have so much fun until I came to the school.
ReplyDeleteWhen I arrived at the school gate. I has been welcome with the school headmaster. He has a very furious face. I enter the school with scary feeling. 5 second after my parent living I was crying and thrashing in front of all teacher and a few of student.
The headmaster was calm down me and bought me some candy at the school cooperatives. He show me my class and sit beside me to make sure I having a great time at school.(135 word)
Name: Muhammad Redzuan bin Zulkifli
Class: 402
I will never forget what happened that day when I went to the beach to spend my holiday with some of my friends from high school. We were having fun as always like playing volleyball,getting our tans and lots of other activities. After being so tired and thirsty,we went to a stall to drink some juice when suddenly a terrorist attack started.
ReplyDeleteThere were three people armed with guns. Everyone was scared to the bone and some children were crying. It was a very shocking incident that may be the worst situation I got caught up in. The intentions of the terrorist attack were still unknown but it seems like they were asking the government to pay a ransom. I thought that this is not their intention as it seems too obvious. What are they going to do with the money? What will happen to us,the hostages? These were the questions popping in my head while observing and analyzing the heated situation occurring before me.
After a while,one of the terrorist called my name. I was confused as why did he know my name. I stood up and answered. He asked me if I remember him but he was wearing a mask so I did not recognized him but I think I heard his voice before. Then,he opened his mask and memories flooded back to me like a tsunami. He was one of the mafia bosses that I took into custody while working as an agent for a secret agency. I never told anyone about this,not even my friends.
I then answered no to keep my identity a secret. I asked him what his intentions were and he answered that he wants to get revenge on a certain someone. After that,he asked one of his men to point a gun at one of the hostages. Then he asked me again if I remember him. He was obviously trying to get myself reveal my secret identity to everyone but I quickly knocked the gunman cold. I was pretty good at martial arts as I did not joined the secret agency for nothing. I then continued to knock the other person and battled with the last person. I know his fighting style as I have already defeated him once so this was easy.
The cops arrived and took the terrorists away. I was very glad that this did not turned into a bloodbath as there were kids there. My friends was so surprised when I took all of the terrorists out but they already knew that I took martial arts classes so it did not look very suspicious to them. We went home back to our families. I called my agency and asked about the man which I thought was already in bars. They answered that he was helped by an anonymous figure to get out and said that this was just the beginning.
Name:Amirul Hakimi bin Rosazlan
Class:402